教育星空 親子之間:孩子的作文課

親子之間:孩子的作文課

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【新三才首發】兒子因為文筆不錯,後來學校老師開了義務培訓學生的作文班,就邀請他一起參加,希望在老師的指導之下,可以更上層樓。

上過幾次課之後,我問兒子說都在上甚麼?他說老師會選一個題目,然後訓練他們打大綱,把大綱寫出來之後,再開始寫文章的內容。可是他有點困惑,因為他寫作文不習慣打大綱,所以往往都得假裝再打大綱應付一下老師。然後他又說老師會教一些寫作的技巧,例如詞句的「排比法」、「擬人法」等等,他也說他不太喜歡這樣的規則。

最後,有次上完課之後,兒子終於跟我說他不想再繼續上了,因為他覺得老師這樣的教法他不喜歡。我跟他溝通了很久,兒子還是很堅持不想去上,最後我想到一個辦法。我說:「你寫一篇文章給我看看,題目不拘,內容寫法不限,只要你寫出來的文章,我認為夠水準了,我就同意你不用在去上作文課。」兒子一聽,倒是也很乾脆地說好,他馬上來寫。

大約過了一個小時之後,兒子文章寫好了,拿來給我看。我原本還想說要好好挑一下文章的毛病,來說服兒子還是繼續去上課。結果,看完之後,我改觀了。兒子寫了一個題目,叫做寫給他的第一盒樂高積木的一封信。內容就是用信件的體裁來寫,不但文句通順,而且處處顯現他的幽默感與創意,例如他把樂高形容為就像小叮噹(哆啦A夢,日本卡通人物)的百寶袋一般的神奇,可以創造與變化出各式各樣的東西。

雖然有幾個錯別字,以及有些小地方的疏漏問題,但整體而言,創意、文章構成、用詞遣字各方面,都已經有一定水準,我突然感覺到,他就是有他自己的寫作風格、創意與幽默感,為何一定要他去上課,去套用既有的框架,來限制他的才華呢?

最後,我摸摸他的頭,稱讚他寫得很棒,所以我同意他可以不用去上作文課了,兒子聽了也很開心,說要把這封信保存起來做紀念呢。

(作者:張季民)

(責任編輯:姜啟明)

(文章來源:新三才首發)

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